This map fails to keep Salt Lake County, the most populous county in our state with 34% of the entire state population as a single community of interest. This map goes against allowing a single group to choose its own representative. The power of the citizenry is diluted with any division of this county.

Having two competitive districts does not make a map gerrymandered, but combining unlike communities and separating them from like ones to engineer two competitive districts, as you do here, does make this map a gerrymander.

These splits make no sense and the districts are not compact.